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Dreams Borne Within

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Dreams born within us are the dreams
We cannot bear to live without.
Shunning fear of judgment redeems
Dreams born within us; are the dreams
Inside us strong enough? It seems,
Cruel as it may be, there’s no doubt
Dreams born within us are the dreams
We cannot bear to live without.
My first attempt at a triolet. I found it difficult to create a coherent progression of thought within such a short poem; I hope the intent of my poem came across clearly :hmm: I'd appreciate any feedback or critique.

(2013)
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